Friday, July 30, 2010

Handsy

Leslie choked momentarily, coughed, and pushed the morsel back into her mouth. She shook her head in disgust as Paul’s life dripped from her chin. So damn eager… too bad really. He was cute.



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27 comments:

  1. Susan CrossJuly 30, 2010 at 9:56 AM

    Great! Short is good. I had to read it twice but that's because mine was still fresh on my mind. Thought yours ate mine! I got carried away and went too long. Next time!

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  2. DeliaJuly 30, 2010 at 10:00 AM

    Fantastic.

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  3. Laura EnoJuly 30, 2010 at 10:11 AM

    Awesomely gruesome. :)

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  4. shannonJuly 30, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    I had to read it three times and...ewe! LOL Really??? ewe :-)

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  5. J. Dane TylerJuly 30, 2010 at 11:51 AM

    Awesome! Chewy, choking, crunchy awesome! Nice job! A lot of things conveyed in a tiny li'l ol' space. :)

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  6. KemariJuly 30, 2010 at 12:22 PM

    You're disgusting! And I love it. Hahaha. You definitely packed a punch with this one. Although I think it was just an excuse to post that video (but I won't tell anyone, I promise *wink wink*)

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  7. Sulci CollectiveJuly 30, 2010 at 3:30 PM

    I'm guessing Paul isn't a prawn or shrimp...

    Deftly done

    Marc Nash

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  8. dan powellJuly 30, 2010 at 4:38 PM

    Short and not at all sweet. Chilling. Good stuff as always, 2.

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  9. Icy SedgwickJuly 30, 2010 at 4:42 PM

    Sometimes you only need a few words to say something ace. Good work!

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  10. Adam ByattJuly 30, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    Followed Icy's RT. Glad I did. Packed a great punch.
    Adam B @revhappiness

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  11. Eric J. KrauseJuly 30, 2010 at 6:01 PM

    Quite gruesome and excellent. Might be short, but it sure packs a punch. I guess he had to learn the hard way.

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  12. Melissa L.WebbJuly 30, 2010 at 10:21 PM

    Very disturbing in a brillant way. Loved it. :)

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  13. UnknownJuly 30, 2010 at 11:12 PM

    wickedly well-done, 2... loved this MICRO flash.

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  14. LindaJuly 31, 2010 at 8:06 AM

    Hope Paul's a pesky pigeon or squirrel, but I fear not. Super tight micro -- impressive. Peace...

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  15. MariJuly 31, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    Oh!

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  16. RaShelle WorkmanJuly 31, 2010 at 12:49 PM

    This is nasty!!! Fantastic, but nasty. =D

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  17. Danielle La PagliaJuly 31, 2010 at 6:14 PM

    Awesome & evil! Loved it!

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  18. Tomara ArmstrongAugust 1, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    Thanks you guys for reading and commenting. I just got home, so now it's time for me to catch up on my reading and your stories.

    Kemari- I had another story in mind with a different video, but decided on this one last minute :-P

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  19. Jason WardenAugust 1, 2010 at 4:22 PM

    mmmmm Delicious, short and sweet. Ok, that was terrible. Good job.

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  20. KjMAugust 1, 2010 at 8:43 PM

    Oh, thank god that was short - couldn't deal with a longer version! :D

    Excellently done 2.

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  21. ~TimAugust 1, 2010 at 9:19 PM

    It sounds dirty when you say it like that. Good work!

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  22. India DrummondAugust 2, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    I love it. So much impact!

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  23. MariAugust 2, 2010 at 9:56 AM

    You know, I don't compliment stuff I like for nothing. There's a fabulous award waiting for you at Randomities. ;)

    http://bit.ly/plethora_award

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  24. Donald ConradAugust 3, 2010 at 3:57 AM

    No Chianti? No fava beans? With this one, short works. Thanks.

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  25. Cat RussellAugust 3, 2010 at 5:33 PM

    Wow. You sure didn't need a lot of words to convey a powerful (and may I say gross) image. Well done!

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  26. Cathy Olliffe-WebsterAugust 3, 2010 at 6:22 PM

    How come it's always the cute ones that get ate?

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  27. J. M. StrotherAugust 12, 2010 at 9:40 AM

    Whoa! Where did that come from? Really gruesome, tight, and full of punch. Micro's hard - you did good.
    ~jon

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