Friday, July 30, 2010

Handsy

Leslie choked momentarily, coughed, and pushed the morsel back into her mouth. She shook her head in disgust as Paul’s life dripped from her chin. So damn eager… too bad really. He was cute.



Watch Miniature Tigers "Cannibal Queen"

27 comments:

  1. Great! Short is good. I had to read it twice but that's because mine was still fresh on my mind. Thought yours ate mine! I got carried away and went too long. Next time!

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  2. I had to read it three times and...ewe! LOL Really??? ewe :-)

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  3. Awesome! Chewy, choking, crunchy awesome! Nice job! A lot of things conveyed in a tiny li'l ol' space. :)

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  4. You're disgusting! And I love it. Hahaha. You definitely packed a punch with this one. Although I think it was just an excuse to post that video (but I won't tell anyone, I promise *wink wink*)

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  5. I'm guessing Paul isn't a prawn or shrimp...

    Deftly done

    Marc Nash

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  6. Short and not at all sweet. Chilling. Good stuff as always, 2.

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  7. Sometimes you only need a few words to say something ace. Good work!

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  8. Followed Icy's RT. Glad I did. Packed a great punch.
    Adam B @revhappiness

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  9. Quite gruesome and excellent. Might be short, but it sure packs a punch. I guess he had to learn the hard way.

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  10. Very disturbing in a brillant way. Loved it. :)

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  11. wickedly well-done, 2... loved this MICRO flash.

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  12. Hope Paul's a pesky pigeon or squirrel, but I fear not. Super tight micro -- impressive. Peace...

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  13. This is nasty!!! Fantastic, but nasty. =D

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  14. Thanks you guys for reading and commenting. I just got home, so now it's time for me to catch up on my reading and your stories.

    Kemari- I had another story in mind with a different video, but decided on this one last minute :-P

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  15. mmmmm Delicious, short and sweet. Ok, that was terrible. Good job.

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  16. Oh, thank god that was short - couldn't deal with a longer version! :D

    Excellently done 2.

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  17. It sounds dirty when you say it like that. Good work!

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  19. No Chianti? No fava beans? With this one, short works. Thanks.

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  20. Wow. You sure didn't need a lot of words to convey a powerful (and may I say gross) image. Well done!

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  21. How come it's always the cute ones that get ate?

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  22. Whoa! Where did that come from? Really gruesome, tight, and full of punch. Micro's hard - you did good.
    ~jon

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